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Denise Levertov
Denise Levertov

Grandson
Our Great-grandson, Christmas 2009
Photo by my husband, Gene


A Christmas Poem

by Jane Elsdon

Many decades ago, Denise Levertov, one of the first poets whose work intrigued me, wrote of the making of a poem.

She said a poem comes from a constellation of events:  what we are observing, experiencing, and feeling about what is going on around us and within us at a given time.  This is a rough paraphrasing of the way she said it, but it's as close as I can come today.  That definition continued to have the ring of truth to me, because I was aware that the content of a poem had everything to do with what was happening within me when I wrote it. 

About eight years ago when we went to Utah to visit our youngest daughter and her family at the holidays, once more I found it to be true.  We were so happy to be with our children and grandchildren that the joy of the season simply lit up everything around us.  Add to that, delicious and familiar fragrances, sparkling lights, and joyous sounds and you have constellated poetry.  So instead of getting the cinnamon roll I was expecting I got it and an unexpected poem.  That's what I call a real holiday gift!  And I wish such gifts to you in this beautiful season.

Unexpected Harvest

                                                                                                                          Logan, Utah
                                                                                                                         December 12, 2002

Posted outside the brick building is a sign:
PARKING FOR CUSTOMERS OF
GREAT HARVEST ONLY. ALL OTHERS
WILL BE BEATEN WITH BREAD DOUGH.

Entering, we’re greeted by the embrace
of heaven-scent aromas drifting from shelves
upon shelves of baked delicacies: yeasty breads,
cookies, cinnamon rolls to sigh for.

A cheerful young woman behind the counter
welcomes us, offers samples from an array
of fresh breads: puffy speckled domes
of cinnamon burst, plump pink rounds of cherry

chocolate bread, rich brown and beige oblongs
of pumpkin chocolate chip and sunflower
whole wheat. "A small slice of cherry chocolate,"
my husband acquiesces with a smile.

"I’m not allowed to cut anything small,"
the clerk replies; she slices a slab and points
to the butter. Inhaling with appreciation,
we order cinnamon rolls and sit at a small

round table while the rolls are swathed
in a fresh coat of frosting. Swags of white lights
drape the ceiling like stars a yuletide sky.
Christmas music electrifies the air.

CELEBRATE SIMPLICITY suggests a sign
above the great iron pot of soup that bubbles
an invitation on a nearby counter: SOUP
AND A SLICE: $2.49.

Two skinny teenage boys in baggy pants
enter, at once caught up in the ambiance
of fragrant bread offerings and the lilt and
cadence of Dixie Chicks singing "Hey Santa."

In a surge of spontaneity, with joyful grins, both boys
accept bread samples and break into
exuberant, unselfconscious swing steps.
In blissful freedom they dance
between the counter and tables.

Enraptured, we look on.  This place is well-named.
For an unexpected moment we glimpse
the world at its best, the world as it can be.

It is an epiphany.
It is a Great Harvest.

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