One Poet's PerspectiveApril 2011
Home The Business of the Journal Town Business It's Our Nature Slo Coast Life Slo Coast Arts Archives

Spring Laughter

by Jane Elsdon

Gene Elsdon

Lavishing itself upon us without restraint, rain has nourished our hills and valleys to an emerald sheen and countless shades of other greens. 
Wildflowers swathe meadows and hillsides with a glory of colors that  awakens our hearts to the joy that is always there inside us, whether we keep in touch with it or not.  And we understand what Ralph Waldo Emerson meant when he said, "The earth laughs in flowers."  It surely does this spring.

There is nothing that one cannot write a poem about.  In my mind at the moment, poetry and flowers go together. They both spell joy to me.  From the beginning, I loved rhyming poetry.  (It must have been those nursery rhymes!)   As obsolete as rhyme is in the minds of many today, it still holds a special place in my affections.  And there is no paucity of people who don't think it's poetry unless it rhymes.

Gene Elsdon

Garrison Keillor recently made a cogent observation online when he said, "Poetry is a record of the life around us and in us, and you'll get a better idea from poetry what it was like to be alive in 2011 than you will from the New York Times."  No doubt about it. 

This brings me to the two poems I choose to share with you this month.  They sprang from May laughter, discovery, and joy.  In one you'll find rhyme.  May Basket Surprise tells you a bit about 1980 and Wildflower Wisdom about the early seventies.  By doing this column I'm learning that for me poetry has been a kind of memoir that records significant events involving my family, friends, myself, and the world.  May your spring days be lavished with the laughter of flowers, joy, and the grace of unexpected discoveries.

Gene Elsdon

May Basket Surprises

 Hemline torn and dragging, you
Danced blithely through the door
Oblivious that you also danced
Fresh mud across fresh floor.

The frown about to crease my face
Never saw the light of day
For in your chubby fist you held
Your first treasured gift of May.

In a tattered paper basket,
Cut and pasted by your hand,
Drooped blossoms in disarray,
Sweetest flowers in all the land.

For you held them out to me
In your own special way.
Smudged and strangely shy, you said,
For you, Mom, ummm Happy May Day.

Now I scrub the floors no more,
For my kitchen carpet’s new,
While the one knee-deep in suds
Is a brand new grown-up you.

And this year offers a May Day
To bring dancing to my eyes,
There will be a wicker bassinet
Our first grandchild is the prize.

Gene Elsdon

Wildflower Wisdom

(From my  friend and mentor,  Bert Schievink, the Hermit of the Dunes.)

Looking at a petaled pink star
“What do you call this wildflower?”
I asked my friend, the hermit.
“It isn’t important what you call it,”
he said.
“But only that you love it.”

I sniffed it, I whiffed it,
gently I stroked it.
My eyes devoured it,
my heart loved it,
my soul made it its own,
and I didn’t need
to pick it.

Artwork and Photographs by Gene Elsdon
Monarch Butterfly Banner Image by Mike Baird
Site Menu

The Business of the Journal
—About the Slo Coast Journal
—Archives
—Just for Fun
—Letters to the Editor
—Stan's Place
—Writers Index


The Business of Our Towns
—Community Calendar
—Junior Lifeguard Programs and Scholarships
—Morro Bay Library Events
—Quotable Quotes

It's Our Nature
—A Bird's Eye View
—Coastland Contemplations
—Elfin Forest
—Exploring the Coast
—Marine Sanctuaries
—Sweet Springs Reflections

Slo Coast Arts
—Art Talk
—Genie's Pocket
—Great Shots
—One Poet's Perspective
—Our World Underwater
—Opera SLO

Slo Coast Life
—Behind the Badge
—Best Friends
—California State Parks
—Double Vision
—Far Horizons
—Feel Better Forever
—Grow, Learn, Eat
—Joanne Heaney, Los Osos Treasure
—Let's Go Green
—Medical Myth Busting
—Observations of a Country Squire
—Sea Otter Experience Trailer Opens for Another Season
—Surfing Out Of The Box
—Take a Hike
—Under the Tongue

News, Editorials & Commentary
—Wastewater Treatment Plant: Who's in Charge?
—Conservation?
—Diodati Resigns from Planning Commission
—Electronic House Meets Low-EMF Design
—Help Environmental Organizations Think Through a Smart Energy Policy
—Mystery in Morro Bay:  Update
—The Nearly Invisible Part of the Energy Puzzle
—Plan B - Are Morro Bay and Cayucos Contemplating an End Run around the CCC?
—Smart Meter Opt-In Left Out

Green Web Hosting
All content copyright Slo Coast Journal and Individual Writers.
Do not use without express written permission.